Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people. Why does this happen? What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?
It is true that outside
visitors give more
preference to museums and ancient buildings, Suggestion
visitors to give more
however
native of that particular city
do not take much interest toward these sites.There are multifarious reasons behind this
phenomenon and I believe that people can be motivated to visit
these places by taking number
of steps which I will discuss in Suggestion
a number
the number
next
paragraphs.
To begin
with the reasons of visiting historical buildings is less by local individuals as compared to tourists.Firstly
, people of that city
are always busy in their work ,
so they do not have enough Accept space
,
time
to go to any place and whenever they have some free time
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time, then
then
they like to spend the free time
with family, conversely
tourists come to the city
for enjoying their holidays or free time
and they have purpose
to Suggestion
purposed
visit
different sites and museums for expanding their knowledge.For example
, when people go to Golden temple in Amritsar then
people have plan
to Suggestion
planned
visit
it when they go to Amritsar and they also
visit
other places there like Jalia Wala Bagh, Sikh museums, Baba Deep Singh Gurudwara Sahib As well.Thus
, it depends on individuals’ main purpose why they are going to a particular place but
local people always live there and their purposes are to earn and live in that Accept comma addition
place, but
city
.
There are number ways
to encourage Suggestion
a number ways
inhabitants
of that place to see museums and primitive sites.As government should add interesting events and games on these sites so that people get attracted Suggestion
the inhabitants
toward
these places and Suggestion
to
visit
them and show them to their children as well as their friends.Moreover
, entry fee should not be imposed to local people as some people do not spend money for visiting museums and monuments and they think that it is not worthwhile utilization
of their money.Suggestion
a worthwhile utilization
Therefore
, if there is free entry to these sites and there is something amusing for people, obviously they would like to visit
these sites.
On individual level
, people should take initiative Suggestion
an individual level
toward
visiting historical places and apprise their children about the history and culture of that region where they liveSuggestion
to
.
By Accept space
.
this
they would be able to pass knowledge to next generation
as well.
In conclusion, Suggestion
the next generation
next generations
although
there are various reason
that local people do not like Suggestion
reasons
visit
museums, there different steps can be taken on government and individual level toward visiting these sites.Suggestion
visiting
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