it is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for the art projects. For instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures seen in public places. Some people say that it is wrong and governments should spend more money on other important things of public interest. Do you agree or disagree?

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of money

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improving the

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of various parts of cities . We can see paintings , sculptures, carvings and many more artistic objects on display at crossroads,underpasses &

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diiferent

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development is good,

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that it does not occur at the expense of essential needs.

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projects and artistic

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of domestic and foreign tourists which

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government

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to generate revenue for development.

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, it provides

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to people living in the vicinity of the building or monument.

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help children to learn about their culture &

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by learning stories related to it .

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monuments

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involvement

of foreign people to build these

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stage to the development stage .

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we need to import

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of foreign

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to build these

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which can be very expensive &

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time consuming

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of financial burden on

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growth of our country . Next

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all the countries require funds for essential needs like providing better healthcare , infrastructure , education and other facilities to their citizens . It seems awkward if a citizen of a country does not have basic healthcare or primary education and the government is occupied

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spending on artistic projects .

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believe that allocating funds for artistic projects is indeed good as it makes our living

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more aesthetic .

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expenses must be avoided if prerequisites of the people are

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.