it is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for the art projects. For instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures seen in public places. Some people say that it is wrong and governments should spend more money on other important things of public interest. Do you agree or disagree?
Governments nowadays spend
lot
of money Change the article
a lot
in
improving the Change preposition
on
appearence
of various parts of cities . We can see paintings , sculptures, carvings and many more artistic objects on display at crossroads,underpasses & Correct your spelling
appearance
Correct word choice
and at
at
Change preposition
apply
diiferent
public places .Correct your spelling
different
This
development is good, proivded
that it does not occur at the expense of essential needs. Correct your spelling
proven
Such
projects and artistic monuments
are the need of our hour . First , from tourism
point of Correct article usage
a tourism
view
it attracts Add a comma
view,
lot
of domestic and foreign tourists which Add an article
a lot
help
Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
government
to generate revenue for development.Add an article
the government
Secondly
, it provides livelyhood
to people living in the vicinity of the building or monument. Correct your spelling
livelihood
livelihoods
In addition
, they also
help children to learn about their culture & history
by learning stories related to it . Correct word choice
and history
On the other hand
, generally
these Add a comma
generally,
monuments
require lot
of Change the article
a lot
involment
of foreign people to build these Correct your spelling
involvement
monuments
. This
include
from Change the verb form
includes
design
stage to the development stage . Add an article
the design
Moreover
we need to import Add a comma
Moreover,
lot
of foreign Change the article
a lot
material
to build these Fix the agreement mistake
materials
monuments
which can be very expensive & Correct word choice
and time
time consuming
Add a hyphen
time-consuming
also
Correct word choice
and also
.which
can put Rephrase
apply
lot
of financial burden on Change the article
a lot
economic
growth of our country . Next Add an article
the economic
almonst
all the countries require funds for essential needs like providing better healthcare , infrastructure , education and other facilities to their citizens . It seems awkward if a citizen of a country does not have basic healthcare or primary education and the government is occupied Correct your spelling
almost
in
spending on artistic projects . Change preposition
with
Finally
, i
believe that allocating funds for artistic projects is indeed good as it makes our living Change the capitalization
I
environmrnt
more aesthetic . Correct your spelling
environment
However
, such
expenses must be avoided if prerequisites of the people are getting suffered
.Wrong verb form
suffering
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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