It is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for the art projects. For instance, there are more and more paintings and sculpture tures seen in public places. Some people say that it is wrong and govern ments should spend more money on other important things of public in pinterest. Do you agree or disagree?

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Owing to the emphasis given to the aesthetics of our living environment, governments these days spend more money

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improving the appearance of

various parts

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the various parts

cities

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the cities

. We can see paintings, sculptures, carvings and many more artistic objects on display at

crossroads

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a crossroads

, intersections and at different public places.

This

development is good, provided that it does not come at the expense of essential needs.

Such

projects and artistic monuments are the call of the hour.

First

tourism industry

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the tourism industry

is promoted by almost all countries. To attract tourists,

such sculptures and

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such as sculptures and

artistic monuments in public places are often useful.

Second

, they always remind us of our culture and the value of art.

This

is indeed helpful because they work as a bridge between us and our cultural values.

In addition

, they

also

help children in staying connected to the arts.

Finally

such

monuments

also

provide employment to many people who are involved in their design, construction and maintenance.

On the other hand

such

artistic projects are often very expensive to build and to maintain. Governments have to allocate funds not only for the

project but

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project, but

for its maintenance

also

, which, in turn, becomes more expensive.

, almost all countries require funds for essential needs like providing better healthcare, infrastructure, education and other facilities to their citizens. It seems awkward if a citizen of a country does not have basic health care or primary education and the government is occupied in spending on

aristic

relating to or characteristic of art or artists

artistic

projects.

Finally

, I believe that allocating funds for artistic projects is indeed good as it makes

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you

our

living environment more aesthetic.

However

such

expenses must be avoided if vital services in the country are not properly developed.

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