Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while other think that people can not expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There are split opinions regarding
job
satisfaction versus
job
security. Some believe that being happy with one's
job
is a priority, whereas
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
believe that it is difficult to just remain contented and so a permanent
job
should be preferred.
Therefore
, before commenting on my decision both the opinion would be discussed. Examining the former view, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that some individuals believe that
there
Suggestion
they're
satisfied with
there
of them or themselves
their
job
.
This
is because working at a place which gives you pleasure may keep you mentally healthy and
this
is turn leads to physical well being
also
.
In addition
to
this
they
also
believe that
job
satisfaction is beneficial for both, the employee and the employer. The reason is employees tend to become more innovative, enthusiastic and ready to embrace more responsibilities.
On the contrary
, the latter view
suggest
Suggestion
suggests
that a stable employment is more
essential even
Accept comma addition
essential, even
if a person has no
job
satisfaction. Because
this
belief is for survival people need a regular income to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their basic requirements. There should be an assurance of
recieving
get something; come into possession of
receiving
a consistent income.
Besides
this
, it is
also
true that permanent jobs result in to
job
advancement in future. In fact the
some
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
kind of
job
brings professional skills and expertise.
This
may result
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
good position, higher salary and ultimately good retirement perks. To conclude and give my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
support the latter view as for leading a comfortable and a stress free life, working
streadily
at a steady rate or pace
steadily
is more important. I strongly believe that to live a good life and cope up with our financial responsibility, the feeling of being satisfied is quite bookish.
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