Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. discuss both views and give your opinion.

The ability to lead is one that has raised countless debates. Most opine that
this
is a skill that can be nurtured, while others insist a person is either birthed with it or not. Both sides have valid points which would be covered in
this
essay.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am of the opinion that
this
too, like many other attributes, can be taught. When speaking about the possibility of mastering an area of expertise, most are adamant that with hard work and dedication, anything can be
learnt
Suggestion
learned
and perfected, including the ability to direct a group of people. The fastest reference they point to is the
On going
Suggestion
Ongoing
debate on who the better football player is between Christiano Ronaldo, who is not as talented but is particular about being the best and Lionel Messi whom
on the other hand
,
Accept space
,
was born with a gift. In
this
instance, both are very good at what they do regardless of the origin of
this
prowess. The same is the case with being the
figure-head
a person used as a cover for some questionable activity
figurehead
in a group. Alternatively, while some have to work hard to inculcate the features and knowledge of a
delegator
, others have these traits bestowed upon them from inception.
This
serves an equally good purpose because it saves both the delegator and the delegates time. Since he or she intuitively knows what is required of him on or before they come. An instance of
this
was showcased in the 1985 boardroom fire at KPMG where, During an executive meeting, a
wild fire
a raging and rapidly spreading conflagration
wildfire
broke loose and even though the building was littered with upper and middle management, it was the Janitor who stepped up amidst the chaos and directed everyone safely out of the building before the fire service showed up. To conclude, it is indeed great to be conceived with characteristics that positively set you apart. Though, I believe with
such
easily attained traits come laziness.
therefore
Suggestion
Therefore
, working towards acquiring and retaining
such
characteristics in my opinion is better.
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