A letter to your friend travelling overseas. You are staying at their apartment and there was a storm. Tell your friend about the storm. Tell them what got damaged Details what repairs to be done.

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Dear Jane, How's everything with you and hope you're enjoying your stay in your new city? I'm writing to let you know about a huge storm that destroyed the rooftop

last

night.

Last

night, there was a heavy rainfall in the city for approximately 5 hours.

This

storm affected many houses and apartment, mostly on your street. Your place was one of the affected ones. The storm slightly blew open the roof top of your apartment and

as a result

, the apartment is flooded.

Also

, it damaged the fence as well as the plumbing. I spent the midnight scooping water from the house because my room was flooded as well, so I couldn’t sleep. Currently, the flat is uninhabitable and

therefore

, repairs are needed, most especially the roof and plumbing.

In addition

, new water pipes need to be bought,

although

there are some leftovers from the

last

time repairs were done in the house. I've contacted the contractor and he's promised to come

this

afternoon. I really hope

this

gets repaired on time. Enjoy the rest of your trip! Love, Ay.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

181 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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A letter to your friend travelling overseas. You are staying at their apartment and there was a storm. Tell your friend about the storm. Tell them what got damaged Details what repairs to be done.

Fully explain your ideas

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