The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in differenr age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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bar chart illustrates the proportion of gender in a different

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, from 15 years old to over, of Australian people who did usually exercise in 2010. At first glance,

men

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and

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are not the same.

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peaks at teenagers, 15 to 24 years old, made up 52.8% and decreased to the lowest of all by 39.5% in

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between 39.5% before gradually

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to 46.7% at

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65 and over.

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trend

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were not like

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. Teenage

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were 47.7% before moderately

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to the peak of all

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53.5% at

age

45 to 54.

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slightly dipped down to 47.1% at ages 65 or over which

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less than the teenage

women

only 0.6%. In summary,

men

usually did

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activity

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a teenager

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,

while

women

liked to do it in the middle ages, but rage is nearly the same when

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65 or over. Yet comparing

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both sexes,

women

is

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likely to do exercise or active activity than

men

.