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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph illustrates the development of
population
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the population
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 in the countries of
India
 and
China
. The time period was calculated from 2000 and predicted up to 2050. As presented in the graph, it is predicted that
India
 will have tremendous growth by 2050 and it is assumed that more or less 1600
billion
people
. As far
in
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China
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,China
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 it is predicted that their
population
 growth will
being
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be
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 maintained by 1400
billion
people
. As we see in 2000,
China
as
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a
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population
below
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is below
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 1300
billion
 and gradually increased to 1400
billion
 by 2020 and it is assumed that
population
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the population
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 will increase
upto
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up to
 2030 by more or less 500
billion
people
. It is predicted that from 2030 to 2050
their
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 will be
slight
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a slight
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 decrease in
population
 and comes back to
population
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the population
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 calculated in mid of 2010 and 2020. The total
population
 of
India
 in 2000 was 1000
billion
 and it has a gradual increase in
population
 till 2020
and
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it is assumed that
population
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the population
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 will increase by 1600
billion
people
 by the year
of
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apply
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2050. It is
also
intrepreted
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interpreted
 that by 2030 there will be
overlapping
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an overlapping
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 of
population
 census in
India
 and
China
that
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is about 1400
billion
people
 but not more than 1500
billion
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, billion, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "more or less" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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