Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. Mention about the current sport facilities available. what kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced. how the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to request you to install additional
sports
equipments
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equipment
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in our locality for people between 25 to 35 years. Currently/Presently, the only
sports
available in our locality are
mini golf
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and chess, which are mostly played and enjoyed by elderlies.
However
, there are no
sports
facilities available for
the
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young office goers like myself. I would request you to kindly construct extra sporting infrastructure for games
such
as badminton, cricket and lawn tennis which are more suitable for the youngsters.
Further
,
i
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would request you to install adequate lighting facilities as we can only play in the evenings. These
sports
games are suitable for working people because of hours of working in the office completing the projects within the deadline. By playing these
sports
as
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they
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can not only reduce their stress level but
also
can keep them physically and mentally fit. I hope you will take my suggestion into consideration and will take immediate action. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur.
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