Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Paying of tax to improve public schools is increasing day by day among the society.
Thus
, some people said that one whose child is public
school
need not to pay for the supporting
taxe
an enclosed armored military vehicle; has a cannon and moves on caterpillar treads
tanks
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tax
. In my way of thinking, I completely agree with
this
statement, because taxing
such
people would be a double payment to them.
First
and
furmost
ranking above all others
foremost
fur most
,
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,
taxing one who
do not attend
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does not attend
a government
found
furnished with funds
funded
schools would be a double taxing. It would be an extra charge. In other way round, families evolve may not be financially strong
.
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.
therefore
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Therefore
, it would bring suffering to them and increase poverty among the nation. To exemplify,
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, my blood brother, who study economics, prove to me that 18% of a
country
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country's
population would live in poverty if government mount taxes to those who take their kids to privatise institution. It is not the best thing collecting money from people who send their children to an individual own institute to improve the public schools
Furthermore
, collecting money from evolved in private would
dis courage
try to prevent; show opposition to
discourage
the family. Thereby, forces them to
withdrew
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withdraw
their offsprings from individual own institution to government owned schools. It is an improper thing to do, as it may discourage many
student
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students
to even stop attending
school
.
As a result
of being comfortable in their previous
school
. As a prove, my niece Obi, who is studying in
school
of nurse, stopped
school
when his mother changed his institute because of high rate of charge.
Clearly it
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Clearly, it
would be best if the
taxe
charge against a citizen's person or property or activity for the support of government
tax
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is excluded to the families who chose
otherwise
. Conclusively, charging individual who chose not attend public institution money to
supports
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support
the
school
is not the best thing as it may lead to
extream
of the greatest possible degree or extent or intensity
extreme
poverty and illiteracy.

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