Many Families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.

Nowadays many

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Nowadays, many

families like to relocate to different parts of the countries in order to have

better

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a better quality education

quality

education

for children. While some believe there are few benefits to children, others argue that there are some drawbacks to consider. In

this

essay, I tend to agree with the former argument, and I will support my view with examples. On the one hand, one disadvantage of relocating to different countries will be their foreign native

language

. As most of the children does not know their foreign

language

at the beginning as they are not born in those countries.

Moreover

, they are moving for the

first

time so

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time, so

they have to learn and get

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used

to their

language

. To illustrate

this

issue, few children who are coming from Indian countries

such

as, Telangana state where English is not their

first

language

.

As a result

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of

from

this

kind of children it will be an extreme problem to learn English in order to settle in

foreign country

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a foreign country

foreign countries

like Canada, Australia where they only speak in English.

On the other hand

, one advantage of

this

relocating is to have

good

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a good quality education

quality

education

for children.

Although

their native country does have good

colleges but

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colleges, but

quality

and exposure of university

education

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are

far much better which is provided in foreign countries.

For Instance

the foreign in a

survey it

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survey, it

was found that many Indian

student

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students

try to memorize few subjects without knowing the meaning and good understanding as they don’t get practical knowledge,

where as

on the other hand

whereas

in

foreign country

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a foreign country

the universities make studies less burden and more fun by

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pro as

a result children come out with flying

colors

a flag that shows its nationality

colours

from universities. In Conclusion,

although

language

will be a problem for children for

short period

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a short period

short periods

of time. In my opinion, the benefits of relocating for children can provide good

quality

and practical

education

in their near future to succeed.