Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • thank them for the photos and for the holiday • explain why you didn’t write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

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letter to express my gratitude

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the holiday vacation that we’ve made. I love the pictures that you’ve sent to me and thank you for that. I am very sorry for the late response and would you like to go and stay

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my beach house? I received the photos

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week and they were beautiful and priceless too. I would like to thank you for sending those shots. I really appreciate our bonding moments during our holiday. The reason why I didn’t reply to you is

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I need to finish my reports.

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, our manager appointed me to discuss the financial performance of our company. I would like you to invite

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our beach house on the 25th of March. I already planned

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fun activities that we can do, like sunbathing, barbecue party and so on. I hope that you are available on that day and you can invite some of your friends. Can’t wait to bond with you. Regards, Rhea

Fri Feb 28 2020

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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