In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?

Developments in medical technology and health care systems, among many other factors, are leading to people having longer life expectancy than before. As

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trend continues, in the future, we can expect the number of

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older

people will be much greater than that of young people. In several ways, society may benefit from a growing proportion of senior citizens.

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, I believe the rest of the

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population would have to shoulder much more responsibilities and the global economy would face a serious

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

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crisis. On the positive side, an increase in the number of old people means a greater pool of volunteers for community and government projects. These people are usually more financially comfortable and

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more willing to contribute free

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

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to ameliorating their communities.

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, we often see old people in developed countries engage in charity work to provide shelter and food for the homeless in their

neighborhoods

a surrounding or nearby region

neighbourhoods

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an act

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instils a great sense of responsibility and altruism into

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the younger

generation.

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is, in fact, globally recognized to be advantageous in a

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where selfishness

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hinder

one from taking action for the sake of others.

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, aging populations will place the whole

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under many pressures. Both governments and businesses will have to pay for increased retirement pensions and health care costs, which means

tax-payers

someone who pays taxes

taxpayers

will have to bear a greater financial burden and

the young

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younger

workforce will have to work harder and care for the elderly at the same time.

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,

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the lack

of young

labor

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workforce would cause stagnation for the growth of individual businesses and the global economy as a whole because little innovation may take place in

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circumstance. As a matter of fact, many

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countries whose proportion of senior citizens is higher than that of young people,

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as Japan, are already experiencing these undesirable impacts. In conclusion, an aging population is beneficial in certain ways.

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, the benefits society may reap from an aging population cannot match the damage it inflicts. It is important that the

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governments should not underestimate the complexity of

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problem and take immediate action to reduce its future influences.