In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?

Developments in medical technology and health care systems, among many other factors, are leading to people having longer life expectancy than before. As
this
trend continues, in the future, we can expect the number of
old
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older
people will be much greater than that of young people. In several ways, society may benefit from a growing proportion of senior citizens.
However
, I believe the rest of the
world
population would have to shoulder much more responsibilities and the global economy would face a serious
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
crisis. On the positive side, an increase in the number of old people means a greater pool of volunteers for community and government projects. These people are usually more financially comfortable and
therefore
more willing to contribute free
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
to ameliorating their communities.
For example
, we often see old people in developed countries engage in charity work to provide shelter and food for the homeless in their
neighborhoods
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhoods
neighbourhood
.
Such
an act
also
instils a great sense of responsibility and altruism into
the young
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the younger
generation.
This
is, in fact, globally recognized to be advantageous in a
world
where selfishness
hinders
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hinder
one from taking action for the sake of others.
Nevertheless
, aging populations will place the whole
world
under many pressures. Both governments and businesses will have to pay for increased retirement pensions and health care costs, which means
tax-payers
someone who pays taxes
taxpayers
will have to bear a greater financial burden and
the young
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younger
workforce will have to work harder and care for the elderly at the same time.
Furthermore
,
lack
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the lack
of young
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
workforce would cause stagnation for the growth of individual businesses and the global economy as a whole because little innovation may take place in
this
circumstance. As a matter of fact, many
first
world
countries whose proportion of senior citizens is higher than that of young people,
such
as Japan, are already experiencing these undesirable impacts. In conclusion, an aging population is beneficial in certain ways.
However
, the benefits society may reap from an aging population cannot match the damage it inflicts. It is important that the
world
governments should not underestimate the complexity of
this
problem and take immediate action to reduce its future influences.
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