In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?
Developments in medical technology and health care systems, among many other factors, are leading to people having longer life expectancy than before. As
this
trend continues, in the future, we can expect the number of old
people will be much greater than that of young people. In several ways, society may benefit from a growing proportion of senior citizens. Suggestion
older
However
, I believe the rest of the world
population would have to shoulder much more responsibilities and the global economy would face a serious labor
crisis.
On the positive side, an increase in the number of old people means a greater pool of volunteers for community and government projects. These people are usually more financially comfortable and a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
therefore
more willing to contribute free labor
to ameliorating their communities. a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
For example
, we often see old people in developed countries engage in charity work to provide shelter and food for the homeless in their neighborhoods
. a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhoods
neighbourhood
Such
an act also
instils a great sense of responsibility and altruism into the young
generation. Suggestion
the younger
This
is, in fact, globally recognized to be advantageous in a world
where selfishness hinders
one from taking action for the sake of others.
Suggestion
hinder
Nevertheless
, aging populations will place the whole world
under many pressures. Both governments and businesses will have to pay for increased retirement pensions and health care costs, which means tax-payers
will have to bear a greater financial burden and someone who pays taxes
taxpayers
the young
workforce will have to work harder and care for the elderly at the same time. Suggestion
younger
Furthermore
, lack
of young Suggestion
the lack
labor
workforce would cause stagnation for the growth of individual businesses and the global economy as a whole because little innovation may take place in a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
this
circumstance. As a matter of fact, many first
world
countries whose proportion of senior citizens is higher than that of young people, such
as Japan, are already experiencing these undesirable impacts.
In conclusion, an aging population is beneficial in certain ways. However
, the benefits society may reap from an aging population cannot match the damage it inflicts. It is important that the world
governments should not underestimate the complexity of this
problem and take immediate action to reduce its future influences.Submitted by linhlemyhuynh on
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