The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by estimating and reporting the main feature, and make the comparison where necessary.
Hospitals roads are significantly important when it comes to traffic in emergencies and people travelling from
long
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a long
distance
should be easy to locate Fix the agreement mistake
distances
the
destination quite easily. Change the word
their
Couple
of maps Change the article
A couple
provided
below Add a missing verb
are provided
which
shows the Correct pronoun usage
apply
road
access to a city hospital between the year 2007 and 2010. Overall
the essay will describe the changes done in the given period.
According to
2007
layout, Correct article usage
the 2007
city
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the city
road
in south
was straight when compared to 2010 which now has Add an article
the south
the
roundabout near Correct article usage
a
hospital
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the hospital
road
in between Bus
stop was converted to Correct article usage
the Bus
station
in Add an article
the station
a station
west
near Add an article
the west
hospital
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the hospital
road
and that was major
change in 2010. Add an article
a major
Due to
this
conversion
Add a comma
,conversion
the
there wasCorrect article usage
apply
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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