With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

Social media has become an integral part of every youngster's life. It provides a platform to meet and chat with your friends and relatives. Every invention comes with the
some
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
drawbacks, the same is happening with the
use
of social media due to unsupervised
use
of it. In
this
essay we will discuss potential dangerous situations which are occurring due to unrestricted access to the
internet
and possible solutions for the problem.
Although
it has become a fashion among young students to post and share their pics and personal details on social media, but it is resulting in disclosing important information to strangers. As young people add many people on their Facebook, Twiter, Orkut, Instagram or any social platform, many times they connect with strangers
also
.
This
kind of information sharing leads them to face online stocking, threatening, kidnapping and dating with the wrong guy. According to the latest survey on cyber crime, 64% of youth crime are taking place from social media. So the excess and unsupervised
use
of social platform is pushing us in danger only. Even the
internet
excess for social contact has many negative effects still it provides a place to interact with your friends, so you cannot completely ban it. Three types of solutions can be implemented,
first
one is to make youngster
aware
Suggestion
awareness
about social crimes, so they can be alert.
Second
one is parents can restrict
use
of the
internet
for their kids and make them understand the difference between imaginary world and reality.
Third
solution is to make cyber cell more vigilant. As we discussed the negative impact of excess
use
of the
internet
for social media, the best way to deal is to limit the
use
for youngsters.
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