some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation , such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money .others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations . discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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a picayune or substantially significant topic, has triggered an untold number of debates among various walks of
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the one hand
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some people hold the view that it is better
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for
most people to accept
hardships
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hardship
situations in their
life
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is to say
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bad circumstances
such
as lack of money is common in
life
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,
so rather than challenging with them it is better to
adopt
make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose
adapt
ourselves with them and be patient to pass
this
situation
is better than trying to change it.
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the other hand
,
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others hold an opinion that the focal factor in
life
is to try hard to improve
life
condition
. The most compelling reason for their assertion is
,
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trying to figure out solutions to improve
life
condition
may lead to have
bright future
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a bright future
.
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instance
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dissatisfaction with job
condition
may force a person to boost its knowledge and skills and try hard to gain better job position in
friendly atmosphere
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a friendly atmosphere
.
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
trying to improve
bad
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a bad situation
situation
is likely beneficial for each
peson
a human being
person
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in
life
. Considering above
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mentioned, I
mentioned I
agree with
this
view that people should provide
solution
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a solution
the solution
solutions
and try hard to change difficult
condition
of
life
instead
of accepting it
.
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conclude
,
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there are valid argument on both sides of
controversy
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the controversy
a controversy
controversies
.
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.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe
that is
changing bad
situation
in
life
that can inspire people to have better
life
condition
and the pivotal point in
life
is
constant effort
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a constant effort
to have
better
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a better life
better lives
life
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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