Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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. On the one hand
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some people hold the view that, it is better for most people to accept hardship situations in their
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to say
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bad circumstances
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as lack of money are common in
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so rather than challenging with them, it is better to adapt ourselves with them and be patient to pass
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situation
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, is better than trying to change it.
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, others hold an opinion that the focal factor in
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is to try hard to improve
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status. The most compelling reason for their assertion is
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trying to figure out solutions to improve
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condition
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may lead to have
brighter future
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a brighter future
brighter futures
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, dissatisfaction with job
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may force a person to boost its knowledge and skills and try hard to gain better job position.So trying to improve
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a bad situation
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is likely beneficial for each
peson
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in
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. Considering above mentioned
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view that people should provide
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and try hard to change difficult
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of
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instead
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of accepting it
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To conclude
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there are valid argument on both sides of the controversy.
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changing bad
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in
life
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that can inspire people to have
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a better life status
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status and the pivotal point in
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is, constant effort to have
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better conditions
a better condition
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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