An art gallery in your town is looking for volunteers to work in the gallery at the weekends. You would like to do some work in the art gallery in your free time.Write a letter to the art gallery. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work in the gallerysay what type of unpaid work you could dogive details about when you will be available for this work

Dear Sir, My name is Lama and I am a housewife with some free time during the weekend.

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, I would like to be a volunteer in the art gallery.

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, Let me tell you about myself.I am a civil engineer and I got married in 2012,

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baby in 2013 and because of

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I left my work as my family needs me more.

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, I am trying to fill my free time by enriching my Curriculum

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as I will start looking for a job by the end of

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year.

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, I did some volunteering work in many places, like hospitals, banks and nurseries.

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, I am willing to do any work at the art gallery

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, I have excellent computer skills and I can use several software. Thirds, I am free on Fridays and Saturdays from 10:00 until 2:00 pm and

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, from 5:00 pm until 6:30 pm.

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, thanks for your time and effort and I will be waiting for your response so I can start shortly. Yours sincerely, Lama Jaljouli

aljaljoulilamaSat Feb 29 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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193 words

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