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The diagram illustrates rooms for the students, both single and double, at a university in Australia. Overall, there are some differences in dwelling structure and equipments available in it. On one hand, the double rooms are 24 square meters in area with facilities for 2 students and has two beds and a common bathroom.
Moreover
, the rooms
also
 have a cupboard, a separate study desk and chair for each person, a television, a book shelf, and a dinning table with 2 chairs.
On the other hand
, the single room is quite
smaller
Suggestion
small
 (15 square meters) compared to the other one, has a bed space for a single person and a personal bathroom. It
also
 has a study desk and a television,
however
, lacks book shelves, dinning tables and cupboards. For cooking, both sized spaces have an open kitchen, with a stove and a microwave, as well as, a sink for washing utensils. The fees for the single room and the double room is 200 dollars and 350 dollars a week, respectively.
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