The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the average
of
greenhouse emissions per Change preposition
apply
person
in four countries of Europe, namely the United Kingdom, Italy, Sweden and Portugal in a period of time from 1967 to 2007. Overall
, it is clear to see that the UK citizen had by far the highest, while
Portuguese inhabitant
had the lowest in these 40 years.
As the graphs Fix the agreement mistake
inhabitants
shows
, Change the verb form
show
United
Kingdom started with a value of nearly 12 Correct article usage
the United
tonnes
per person
in 1967, and then
, it decreased constantly until reaching 9 tonnes
in 2007. Making the British citizen the most polluting compared to the other European countries. Regarding Swedish's
Average, it began Change noun form
Sweden's
with
approximately 8.5 Change preposition
at
tonnes
per person
in 1967, subsequently
, it increased constantly during the period between 1967 and 1977 until reaching a peak of over 10 tonnes
in 1977. However
, it witnessed a dramatic reduction from 1977 to 1987 and a slightly
decrease until it fell to just under 6 Change the adverb
slight
tonnes
per person
in 2007.
By contrast
, Italian and Portuguese inhabitants experienced a stealthy rise during these 40 years. They started with a value of 4 and 1.8 tonnes
per citizen respectively, to an average of almost 8 for Italian and 6 for Portuguese in 2007.Submitted by xu.roberto20867 on
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