completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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and soft skills.In my opinion,I

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a university education

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is more useful for business. On the one hand,m

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if they are university graduates with a good degree.In

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a tertiary education

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is for people's future

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opportunities.

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or having acquired useful soft skills that can be valuable to a company, can put one ahead of the ga

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or skills and

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training and be of benefit to the company. In conclusion,g

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requires a relevant background either in

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experience depending

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and field.People should make sure they attend the ne

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kills or degrees before applying for a

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in order to be sure of success.