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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

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Social media and various channels on the dish are very common in these days and because of that it is consuming the period of rest and family sitting duration of a person. I accept that, the
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having striking color
colourful
 high definition graphics attracted human toward episodes, which affect the physical fitness and participating to let them live with these gadgets
instead
 of performing in the physical activities. 1ST of all, Latest technology converted human life more attractive toward Animations, Drama, Movies, songs etc. Imagine, once you can attain all the entertainment on one desk, why did you really require to spend time your in sport activities, which cause a huge impact over the medical condition and strength.
This
further
 increases a chance of disease in the body due no physical activities.
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, the family relation in between the relative, brother, sister became less important than these programs. It has been observed that kid’s do not want to meet their uncle, aunt or other’s because they are busy most of the time watching Cartoon’s, which is highly damaging not only the relationship in between the most nearest as well as a highly impact on their eyes because of blue rays generate by the LCD’s.
such
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 scenarios allow the individual to stay away from social life. In conclusion, the family involve to be concerned more on social
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activities, but
 not staying in front of the Television. They should help each other and participate in sports, games, teamwork, helping elders etc., which will aid to develop their fitness and convert them into energetic solid existence.
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