It is important for children to learn the difference beetween right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn thi distinction. To what extent dou you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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distinciton
between right or wrong with Suggestion
the distinction
distinction
punishment
which is neccessary
for understanding absolutely essential
necessary
this
difference.
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with, many kind
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kinds
development
delay can be Suggestion
developmental
occured
by punishments which excess limits. Without doubt, children who under three years, cannot alter the bad or good behaviour because their brain come to pass
occurred
improvment
a change for the better; progress in development
improvement
has not be completed
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is not completed
isn't completed
,
yet. According to Dr. Hamble, a Accept space
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peadagog
at someone who educates young people
pedagogue
pedagogy
Harmshire
University, infants cannot understand why parents punish them. Without doubt, if a British breed of hornless dark-faced domestic sheep
Hampshire
parents
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significant
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statistical result shows clearly that development
delays link with punishments.
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suffer from punishments which was Suggestion
adults
occured
in their bygone. To demonstrate, one of my Suggestion
occurring
occurred
friend
who repeats the words, when he is in the stressful Suggestion
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situation
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me express in words
told
this
situation
was occured
after the father’s Suggestion
occurring
occurred
punishment
. When he stay
in the stressful Suggestion
stays
situation
, he fell
a fear which same as he punished by his father’s so he mat together and make felt-like
felt
can not
talk clearly. In my opinion, can not
cannot
punishment
is not necessary for teaching bad or good things for children. Many pedagog
warns about the the principles and methods of instruction
pedagogy
pedagogue
punishment
which occur some problems on
the Suggestion
in
children
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child
child's
children's
development
and their future life.
Rather, teachers and parents can use many different methods to dicipline
their a branch of knowledge
discipline
puppils
. As stated by the Dr. a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
pupils
puppies
purpose
Sango
, an academician at Harward University, one of the best way the largest city of China; located in the east on the Pacific; one of the largest ports in the world
Shanghai
for
teaching is Suggestion
of
books
, they can learn bad or good easily because they imagine Suggestion
booked
situations
which were in the book. Suggestion
the situations
if
parents or teacher Suggestion
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do not have
any opportunity for solving problem without a Suggestion
does not have
punishment
, they should punish children with punishments which improve their abilities such
as painting wall, cleaning their mess. Without doubt, children’s responsibilitis
can be improved by the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
responsibility
this
way, so in the futre
they can struggle with difficulties by their knowledge.the time yet to come
future
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