The two pie charts below compare employment patterns in Great Britain by sex in 2010.

These pie charts are illustrating information about the comparison of job rate in male and females in the United Kingdom in the year 2010. Overall, it can be seen that managerial & professional accounted to be the largest
segment
in males, while Clerical & related considered the be the biggest
segment
in the women's.
Furthermore
, other manual and other non-manual experienced relatively the same percentage in both genders.
To begin
, managerial& professional was the largest
segment
of the chart in the men, with 38%. On the
second
place came other manual, with a percentage of 28%. Craft or similar showed a number of 21%.
Moreover
, other manual, clerical & related and general labourers were respectively the lowest in the pie chart, with 6%, 5% and 2%. Other manual accounted to be the biggest
segment
in the girls, with 32%. Clerical & related came in the
second
place, with 1% lower.
Furthermore
, managerial & professional showed a percentage of 22 %.
Finally
, other manual, craft or similar and general labourers were the least popular, with 11%, 4.5% and 0.5%.

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