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The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration demonstrates the steps of a
food
 manufacturing process in America.
Overall
, America's
food
 production is a
six stage
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 process that begins with the shipment of cattle as the source of meat and
finally
 produced
the
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beef
food
 product for human consumption at home and
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in restaurant
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restaurant
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restaurants
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. First of all, the cow is delivered by ship
in
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to
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the
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production where the barn is available for the cow storage, shelter, and feeding. After that, the processing takes place for the cow slaughter and
producing
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 the meat
and
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is
subsequently
 cut into the desired sizes and meat product standard. From
this
, the ingredients and spices are added to taste before the processed foods are ready for packaging. Following that, the processed
beef
 products are stored in the distribution building as a buffer zone ready for transport.
Next
 to that,
beef
food
 products are transported to the retail outlet and
restaurant
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restaurants
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 wherein the
food
 chefs cooked the delicious
beef
 dish.
Finally
, people either in the home or in the restaurant enjoyed eating the variety of
beef
 dishes.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, beef with synonyms.
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