Many people these days change career throughout their working life. What are the main reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development for them personally and for the society as a whole?

In our professional
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
enivronment
, we come across people who keep on changing their
career
throughout their
life
without considering its impact on their
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developement
. I believe that
this
affects their professional
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
developement
negatively and has
Suggestion
the same effect
same effect
same affect
on the society and people around them. Since the beginning of our professional
career
, we start to work on developing our skills and expertise which will keep us elevating from
one
step to another. Each step in a
career
requires certain skills to excel to the
next
one
. Once we master all skills and gather experience along the way we reach the top but
this
will only happen if we stick with and keep on making necessary efforts. There are those who keep on changing their
career
path
during the working
life
believing that
this
way they will achieve and learn more than an average person. But
this
is not what they actually achieve and
hence
they cannot progress on
one
straight
path
. Nowadays, at the start of schooling teachers begin to ascertain the aptitude of each child so that they can be set on a
path
on which they reach to the top. It
Suggestion
has been established
has been establish
from various scientific and academic studies or surveys that continuing to focus on the
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
developement
of a single profession results in a successful
career
and
life
. In conclusion, those who keep on learning on
one
career
path
excel more than those doing
otherwise
. People can keep learning different aspects of
life
as
Suggestion
a hobby, but
a hobby but
hobby but
professional careers should be developed by shear dedication and focus.

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