The table data below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010.

The given illustration represents the middle
band
points in the participants the IELTS General Test by people of various language
group
in 2010.
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general, the table
give a description of
describes
decribes
scores for all
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sections
section
together with the overall mark. As it can be seen, the total medium
band
grade of German
group
is the highest and occupied 6.7 points.
In addition
,
this
group
possessed the top
band
score almost in all
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sections
section
, with only one exception in reading part, where they step back to the Malay
group
. The table data clearly shows that French language candidates are
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on
at
the
second
place with overall
band
- 6.5. Especially they depicted significantly higher results in Writing part in comparison with Indonesian and Malay groups, covering 6.5
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points
point
. Returning to the details, after French groups with overall 6.3 bands
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were
was
Indonesian speaking groups,
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they're
their
the highest point in
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the exam
an exam
exam
was at the Speaking part and maintained 6.7.
Likewise
, Malay
group
candidates represented the lowest scores with overall
band
6.4, and
this
is the highest indicator than in
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the other participants' group
other participants' group
other participants' groups
other participants
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the Reading section
Reading section
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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