Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Travelling is the way to have new experiences. As
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world is declared as a global village people have access to almost every part of the world. The tourism industry has seen a major boom, while most a of the individuals choose a destination to holiday or relax, there are other people who interests in exploring isolated places
such
as Antarctica or Sahara Desert. Visiting
such
places gives a new experience, it
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certainly
comes with many favoured and
unfavoured
without flavoring added
unflavoured
circumstances. On one hand, tourists gain many advantages visiting
such
places. As the living conditions are tough the people interesting in visiting has to go through some extensive exercises which helps them in becoming physically and mentally strong.
For
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be medically fit land should possess ability to make quick decisions like how to keep warm in freezing temperatures or to navigate to find water in desert areas.
Such
exercises and surviving
skills creates
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skills, create
skills create
a stable, challenging and
strong individual
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a strong individual
.
On the other hand
,
such
tourists destinations
comes
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come
with many disadvantages. These serious living conditions
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prove
fatal to some people as the cooling temperatures in Antarctica are
low
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lower
than anyone could bear. People
suffers
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suffer
are suffering
from frost bites which can result in fatal infections resulting in loss of limb through major surgeries.In
Sahara Desert
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the Sahara Desert
, the temperature is
exteremly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
high and people are prone to heat strokes which can result in loss of life. These extreme weather conditions can be harmful to
majority
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the majority
of tourists. In
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conclusion, these
destinations can be dangerous and life taking. The person visiting
such
places should be mentally and physically fit and should consider all the harmful impacts before visiting. If all the card falls in right places travelling to
such
place can be an experience of a lifetime.

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