You have a spare room in your Apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to your Student Accommodation Officer of local college and say 1. Where is your apartment located? 2. When will the room be available 3. What are the requirements for a student to stay?

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Dear Sir, With due respect, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about the availability of a room in my

apartment

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which I intend to rent out to a student.

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, I own an

apartment

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at Homeland Heights block C and my flat number is 112. The

apartment

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is located at a prime location with just

5kms

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5 km

away from the airport,

8kms

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8 km

from the shopping complex and

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just 10 minutes walking distance to your college.

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, the

apartment

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consists of four rooms out of which three are occupied by me and my family and the remaining one is being refurbished. Prior to

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this

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it was let out to one of the

student

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from your college who passed out

last

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year. The room is almost complete and is ready to move in from 7th

march

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March

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2020.

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, we want to rent out it to someone

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who is sincere and honest and takes utmost care of the room as all the new bathroom fittings and lights have been installed.

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, the student is required to be back by 9 pm , no

late night

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parties or loud music, outsiders will not be permitted. Only in case of emergency will the outsider be allowed. Prior consent from the owner is a must for the same. In case of any

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clarifications , please feel free to contact on

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email i.e [email protected] Regards,

Mon Mar 02 2020

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task response

Please provide clearer details about the requirements for a student to stay in the room, such as rent, deposit, and any specific rules or regulations.

coherence cohesion

The letter lacks a proper greeting and closing. Please begin the letter with a formal salutation and end with a suitable closing phrase, such as 'Yours sincerely' or 'Best regards.'

coherence cohesion

The ideas are present but the organization and connection between sentences could be clearer. Consider using transition words and ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

233 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

apartment situated in
convenient location
public transportation
amenities
available from
occupancy
non-smoker
quiet hours
rental price
duration of stay
necessary documents
proximity to
college campus
prospective tenant
fully furnished
shared amenities
terms and conditions

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