School and university students learn lessons far better from teacher than from other sources, such as the Internet and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Children today
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will undergo
undergo
a considerable amount of
stress
and one contributing factor to
this
stress
is the over insistence
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of
from
parents
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
to
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Succeed
succeed
in life.
This
attitude has developed among parents due to many reasons and the continuation of
this
trend can result in negative outcomes. The predominant factor leading to
this
phenomenon is the competitive attitude among parents. Parents often force their children to indulge themselves
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In
in
various activities both of academic and non-academic nature as they believe competency in different areas is required for a
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successful life
successful life in
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Future
future
. In order to achieve the desired results the children are subject to a
lot
of pressure. They
also
have a feeling of pride when
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they're
their
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Child
child
excels in various fields and often associate it as
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a matter
matter
of their status in society which adds on to the compulsion. I believe over pressurization would adversely affect a child’s mental health. When children are compelled to involve in activities beyond their
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Interest
interest
and capability, it would not result in a fruitful outcome as the children may undergo a
lot
of
stress
. When they try to cope with
this
pressure
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By
Of
of
becoming successful, their mental health deteriorates and may result in conditions like depression and low self-esteem. In some circumstances, it can
used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
Even
even
lead to situations
(formal) where, in what respect
wherein
where in
the child may decide to run away from home because of his inability to deal with the
stress
. To conclude, the competition among children has increased a
lot
these days and
this
attitude
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forcefully develops
is forcefully developed
in children by parents
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Through
through
a
lot
of coercion. Though
this
may help to mould a child's future to some extent, I believe it has more of a negative impact on a child’s
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Psychological
psychological
health.

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