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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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What follows summarises how preferences for five varieties of fast foods (salads, fried rice, fried chicken, noodles, and hamburgers) vary in Melbourne from 2005 to 2025. Looking as a whole, hamburgers and fried chicken remain far more popular than the other (nutritionally superior) choices at all times.
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, arguably surprising is the ascendancy of salads, which, originally the least consumed, gain increasing favour, and, if predictions prove correct, are destined to eventually rival* their carbohydrate heavy counterparts.
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, all varieties make market inroads, a trend
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 forecasted for the future. Considering the two stereotypical Western foods, hamburgers remain the perennial* favourite, being 40 (undisclosed* units) in 2005, slightly lower now, but expected to rise to an all-time high of 51 by 2025, six above fried chicken.
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 oily alternative does,
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, have its fans, whose collective consumption keeps it a close
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 rises over time, from 35 to 45. As for the other types of sustenance, those starchy Asian staples — rice and noodles -- lack mainstream appeal, starting low, making only marginal gains, and never rising above 10.
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, the lighter-weight salads,
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 a paltry five, exponentially advance to finish with a ‘healthy’ projection of 41. In an age of obesity of epidemic proportions, the growing predilection for salads is certainly an encouraging sign.

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