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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

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The table compares the information about the proportion of fast
food
 eaten by people in Melbourne in terms of five
food
 categories, namely hamburgers, fried
chicken
,
chicken
, fried rice and noodles between 2005 and 2025. It is noticeable that the consumption of convenience
food
 had a slight increase in a period of 20 years.
Also
, the amount of hamburgers and
chicken
 consumed were significantly higher than the remaining kinds of
food
. Of the five types of
food
 listed, hamburger had the highest consumption, at 40 units in 2005 while the proportion of fried
chicken
 eaten in Melbourne was 5 units lower, at 35%. The fried rice and noodle consumed in that year shared the same amount, about 6 units, whereas the equivalent figure for salads was only 5 units. Despite having a small decrease in the present, the hamburgers consumed by Melbourne people are expected to increase, reaching its peak at 51 units in 2025. Meanwhile, about 37 units of fried
chicken
 are being consumed at the moment and the proportion is thought to be experiencing a small growth to 45 units which is lower than that of hamburger roughly 5 units. The amount of salads consumed, interestingly, rises
steady
Suggestion
steadily
 and is predicted to reach 41 units in 2025.
However
, the fried rice and noodles are forecasted to remain nearly unchanged around 9 units in the period shown.

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