The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams
illustrates
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illustrate
the blue print of
wave-energy mamchine
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the wave - energy machine
wave - energy machine
and its location.
This
machine
is used to generate
electicity
a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons
electricity
, the farther the installation from shore the higher its cost and output.
Wave energy
Suggestion
The wave energy machine
machine
has two
chambers one
Accept comma addition
chambers, one
is submersed into water and
other
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the other
is exposed to the Atmosphere.Each chamber works in its own style.
the
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The
chamber submersed in the water generates
electricity
by the
air
flow which comes from waves and rotates the turbine blades
thus
producing
electricity
.
on
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On
the other hand the chamber exposed to
atmosphere
Suggestion
the atmosphere
has an inlet for
air
to flow into the
machine
which rotates the turbine blade and generates
electricity
. Both the chambers
has
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have
outlets through which the
air
escapes from the
machine
. These machines are generally placed in sea water
,
Accept space
,
two places are
prefered
made ready or fit or suitable beforehand
prepared
to place these
machines one
Accept comma addition
machines, one
is nearer to the shore and the other is deep into the ocean.
the
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The
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
produces high output because of
large waves
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the large waves
hitting the
machine
, and the former produces
low output
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a low output
because of small waves.Cost of installation is directly proportion to the distance of
machine
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the machine
from the shore. All in all these machines are used to generate
electricity
using
air
.

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