The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration demonstrates the steps in the
manufacturing process in America. Overall, America's
production has six linear stages that start with the shipment of the cow, as the livestock, meat source, and
, producing the beef foodstuff for human consumption at home or restaurant.
of all, the cow is delivered by ship in the production area where the barn is available for the cow storage, shelter, and feeding.
to that, the processing takes place,
as slaughter, cleaning, and producing the meat, which will
be cut into slices and weigh according to market standards. After that, some ingredients are added and curing the meat to maintain the freshness.
, the products are packed in cans or sealed in plastics. Following that, the distribution building is the point of origin in transporting the products to the retail store and restaurant. Trailer truck is the means of transportation to deliver the products to the restaurant and retail store, in turn, chefs prepare and cook the
, thereby, the family members and the
chain customers enjoyed dining the tasty beef recipe.
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