In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet without any face to face contact with others. To what extent is this a positive or negative development?

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this

21st century when the

internet

is accessible to almost everyone, e--commerce, online shopping and working via

internet

has never been

this

easy. While simultaneously there are definitely some negative impacts of

this

“online lifestyle”

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nevertheless

I believe that

this

is indeed a positive development

for

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individuals and society alike.

First

of all, over the

last

few decades, online shopping has taken a huge leap. Extremely popular sites like Amazon and Ebay (to name a few) have led the way to thousands of other similar online shopping websites. These online stores not only provides

variety

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a variety

of clothing and accessory

collections but

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collections, but

also

has maintained a quick delivery system worldwide and efficient customer services.

thereby

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Thereby

gaining the trust of people for online purchases.

therefore people

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Therefore, people

Therefore people

are more encouraged to shop online rather than spend hours stuck in traffic getting from one place to another.

Also

, online shopping does save a lot of time and

effort especially

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effort, especially

for business persons or stay at home moms.

Secondly

, it has now been almost impossible to work in any institution or office without using

internet

facilities. Meetings and conference calls have become an integral part of our work lifestyle. Applications like Skype, Viber and Gmail has made it possible to finalize business deals worldwide without even the need for stepping out of ones home. Many mothers or students can now become entrepreneurs and run profitable businesses with the aid of online services. Undoubtedly it does save a lot of time

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money and effort without compromising quality

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service and profits. With the invention of

internet

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the internet

and social networking sites, people can now keep in touch with friends and family from all around the world from the own comfort of ones home. They can even get acquainted with new individuals who share same interests and become friends through video chats without even meeting face-t-o face.

Although

there are definitely some drawbacks of

this

kind of online lifestyle

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to me, the advantages outweigh them all. In conclusion, I would like to say that technological advances

has given

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have given

had given

us the opportunity to make our lives more productive and efficient and

internet

facilities

such

as online shopping, working or communicating via

internet

is indeed a boon for the society as a whole around the world.

Tue Mar 03 2020

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