Some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future workforce and make good members of society. Others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. What is your opinion?

is the backbone of a nation.
is abide
is abiding
whole universe
the whole universe
. It is the
which can enlighten
human mind
the human mind
brightly. Without
no one able to understand the actual humanity. The nation as much educated is much
and progressed. The purpose of
could be many more than it describes. Peoples can understand what is right or wrong, what are the basic rights to live and many more after educated themselves. Whatever people think the philosophy of
by themselves, but I think
must be continued by everyone.
Education ofcourse lead
Education, of course, leads
Education ofcourse leads
Education, of course leads
Education, of course lead
Education of course lead
to self-
fulfillment but
fulfilling, but
fulfilling but
fulfilment but
in reality all needs
for the future workforce. When anyone make his future good,
he/she would be a good member of the society.

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