Some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future workforce and make good members of society. Others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. What is your opinion?

Education
is the backbone of a nation.
This
sentence
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is abiding
is abide
by
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the whole universe
whole universe
. It is the
education
which can enlighten
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the human mind
human mind
brightly. Without
education
no one able to understand the actual humanity. The nation as much educated is much
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shinier
shine
and progressed. The purpose of
education
could be many more than it describes. Peoples can understand what is right or wrong, what are the basic rights to live and many more after educated themselves. Whatever people think the philosophy of
education
by themselves, but I think
education
must be continued by everyone.
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Education, of course, leads
Education ofcourse leads
Education, of course leads
Education, of course lead
Education of course lead
Education ofcourse lead
to self-
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fulfilling, but
fulfilling but
fulfilment but
fulfillment but
in reality all needs
education
for the future workforce. When anyone make his future good,
then
he/she would be a good member of the society.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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