Some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future workforce and make good members of society. Others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. What is your opinion?

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Education

is the backbone of a nation.

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sentence

is abide

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is abiding

whole universe

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the whole universe

. It is the

education

which can enlighten

human mind

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the human mind

brightly. Without

education

no one able to understand the actual humanity. The nation as much educated is much

shine

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shinier

and progressed. The purpose of

education

could be many more than it describes. Peoples can understand what is right or wrong, what are the basic rights to live and many more after educated themselves. Whatever people think the philosophy of

education

by themselves, but I think

education

must be continued by everyone.

Education ofcourse lead

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Education, of course, leads

Education ofcourse leads

Education, of course leads

Education, of course lead

Education of course lead

to self-

fulfillment but

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fulfilling, but

fulfilling but

fulfilment but

in reality all needs

education

for the future workforce. When anyone make his future good,

then

he/she would be a good member of the society.

Tue Mar 03 2020

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