There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, I'm writing the letter to inform you about the present situation of bus service in my area.
Firstly
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the busses are not on time
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there is no proper schedule of them. The busses are too much crowded in the morning because of office and school timing
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and there is not any proper seating plan for ladies and gents. Because of these problems, I am persistently late from my office which makes a bad impression on my reputation.
Nevertheless
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if they are on time
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there is not enough space to even stand in the bus
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because of
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the rush
a rush
rush
of people and students. So, I am humbly requesting you to make a proper
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schedule
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of
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bus
bus's
arrival time
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and increase the number of transport so everybody can get space to sit or
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at least
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area for ladies and gents so they can travel comfortably. I really appreciate if you take notice of these problems. Best regards, XYZ

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