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In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why is this? What can be done to deal with it?

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Teenager can be
Suggestion
A teenager can be
 defined as the person who is the foundation of building country and may become the future President to lead our nation.
However
, it is obvious that the cases of teenagers commit crime are alarmingly increased and turn into a heated issue that discussed by most of the people.
Hence
, it is important for us to discuss the reasons of teenagers commit crimes and its solution.
First
 of all, it is undeniable that violence in the media can affect
teenagers' attitude
Suggestion
teenagers' attitudes
the teenagers' attitude
 and behaviour, if it is without the parental guidance .The youngsters who are too young have not the ability to distinguish between the reality and illusion that presented in the media
such
 as television and computer games.
For instance
, most of them will think that the game characters will be resurrected after the game is over, so that they beat the opponent without the slightest hesitation. It is terrible that teenagers deem life as an insignificant presence and contribute to the high rate of crimes.
Besides
, parents should take an active role in their children's life is the crucial point of the solution. Parents must set clear guidelines and rules to prevent teenagers go astray,
such
 as prohibiting any violence from occurring, giving concern and care for them and
obversing
watch and direct
overseeing
 whether they are forced to participate the
gangsterism
 or are influenced by the peer pressure. It is important for parents to let their children avoid any adverse effects. Perhaps, teenagers will think that they are restricted excessively by parents, so that it is time to encourage the youngsters to take part in sports or any hobbies. In conclusion, it is undeniable that teenagers should be concerned by parents, schools and government because of the infinite possibility that will be created by the teenagers. In order to nurture the ridgepole of our country, every public must look into
this
 matter seriously.
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