The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares five countries namely
France
, USA
, Spain, China and Italy in terms of the number
of tourists
and tourist expenditure in the years 2012 and 2013.
In general, the number
of tourists
in France
was highest while
the highest spending on international tourism was seen in the USA
during the period shown. In addition
, both the number
of tourists
and the amount of money spent by tourists
of
the five nations mentioned increased slightly.
In 2012, the Change preposition
from
number
of travelers
in Change the spelling
travellers
France
and the USA
were
83 Change the verb form
was
million
and 66.7 million
respectively, and after one year, these figures increased slightly to 84.7 million
and 69.8 million
. There was a 3 million
rise in the number
of Spanish tourists
while
China saw an
decrease in the Change the article
a
number
of travelers
during the period shown. The Change the spelling
travellers
number
of tourists
in Italy was lowest in 2012 and grew by 1.3 millions
in 2013.
With regard to tourist spending, the Change to singular
million
USA
had the highest tourist spending ($126.2 billion
) while
the lowest expenditure was seen in Italy ($41.2 billion
) in 2012. These figures rose to $139.6 billion
and $43.9 billion
respectively. In addition
, France
, China and Italy witnessed an increase in the amount of money spent by their tourists
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words france, usa, number, tourists, million, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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