Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

People in the developing country are not able to get good
treatment
for a
health
.
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This
this
happens due to the lack of good
government
services related
health
of the public.The death rates of people
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are
is
very high in the developing countries due to
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the lack organised structure
lack organised structure
of
health
services.
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In order
Inorder
to reduce the death rates in the country
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,
,
the
government
has to take an
something done (usually as opposed to something said)
action
act in
acting
actin
towards by introducing new schemes related to
health
services like
aarogyasri
scheme
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,
,
free medical check up camps regularly in villages and
health
insurance. In the developing countries
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,
,
the
government
has to take
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the institution
institution
intiatation
towards
health
service
and bring awareness in public related to the
government
schemes in
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the health sector
health sector
.
to a very great extent or degree
So
so
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,
,
the
health
service
camps should be held regularly in all villages
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,
,
so the old people
close at hand
nearby
near by
places can visit the
a field on which the buildings of a university are situated
campus
camps
to get the medicine.
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We
we
can see the example of
government
like 104
service
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,
,
this
service
come every village once in a month to give medicine to old people in
close at hand
nearby
near by
places. The
government
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also helps
is also helping
has also helped
also help
the poor people get
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a
an
health
insurance for claiming a cost of expensive
treatment
.
to a very great extent or degree
So
so
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,
,
The
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
governement
should have subsidies in
health
related
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
experiences
expences
by giving the
health
related subsidies to the people
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,
,
who are under below the
the state of having little or no money and few or no material possessions
poverty
provety
line.
This
type of
scheme
helps the poor people get
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better
good
treatment
for
health
issues.
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For
for
example
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,
,
This
type of
scheme
will be useful for
a person who requires medical care
patients
patient's
peitents
who are suffering
a giver or sender
from
form
cancer
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,
,
heart problem and many more.
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For
for
treatment
of the issues
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,
,
a person who requires medical care
patient
patients
petient
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needs
need
expensive
treatment
.
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People
people
under
this
category will be
financial assistance in time of need
benefited
benefitted
benifited
by
this
scheme
.
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In
in
wrapping up the above essay
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,
,
the
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governement
has to take
spontaneously derived from or prompted by a natural tendency
intuitive
intitative
toward the
health
related schemes by introduces
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different
difference
services for the
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public, including
public including
from low expensive to high expensive
treatment
by giving the
being or affecting only a part; not total
partial
paritial
or full subsidies depending up on the
treatment
.

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