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Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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People in the developing country are not able to get good
treatment
 for a
health
.
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is h
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This
appens due to the lack of good
government
 services related
health
 of the public.The death rates of people is
v
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are
ery high in the developing countries due to la
ck organised structure o
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the lack organised structure
f
health
 services. In order to reduce the death rates in the country,t
h
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,
e
government
 has to take an ac
tin t
something done (usually as opposed to something said)
action
act in
acting
owards by introducing new schemes related to
health
 services like aa
rogyasri
scheme
,f
r
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,
ee medical check up camps regularly in villages and
health
 insurance. In the developing countries,t
h
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,
e
government
 has to take in
tiatation t
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the institution
institution
owards
health
service
 and bring awareness in public related to the
government
 schemes in
he
alth sector.s
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the health sector
o
,t
to a very great extent or degree
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h
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,
e
health
service
 camps should be held regularly in all villages ,
s
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,
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close at hand
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a field on which the buildings of a university are situated
campus
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We
an see the example of
government
 like 104
service
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,
this
service
 come every village once in a month to give medicine to old people in ne
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close at hand
nearby
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government
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also helps
is also helping
has also helped
he poor people get an
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a
health
 insurance for claiming a cost of expensive
treatment
.so
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to a very great extent or degree
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h
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,
e
government
 should have subsidies in
health
 related expenses by giving the
health
 related subsidies to the people ,
wh
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,
o are under below the poverty line.
This
 type of
scheme
 helps the poor people get go
od
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better
treatment
 for
health
 issues.
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For
xample,
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scheme
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treatment
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needs
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treatment
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People
nder
this
 category will be benefited by
this
scheme
. in
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In
rapping up the above essay,t
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government
 has to take in
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the initiative
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to
he
health
 related schemes by introduces difference services for the pu
blic including f
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public, including
rom low expensive to high expensive
treatment
 by giving the partial or full subsidies depending up on the
treatment
.
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