Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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services related
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the lack organised structure
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services like aa
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scheme
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insurance. In the developing countries,t
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the institution
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service
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and bring awareness in public related to the
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the health sector
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like 104
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also helps
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insurance for claiming a cost of expensive
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should have subsidies in
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related expenses by giving the
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related subsidies to the people ,
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o are under below the poverty line.
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type of
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helps the poor people get go
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better
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related schemes by introduces difference services for the pu
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public, including
rom low expensive to high expensive
treatment
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by giving the partial or full subsidies depending up on the
treatment
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