The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

The bar chart compares post-school educational attainment among men and women in Australia in 1999. As a whole, men were ahead of women in terms of their
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higher
highest
educational qualifications in Australia, and three out of
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the five types
five types
of post-school educational qualifications, namely - post-graduate
diploma
, skilled vocational
diploma
and masters degree, were mostly attended by men. In details, those who had a post-graduate
diploma
and Master's degree were dominated by 70% and 60% men respectively. The ratio of women who had post-graduation qualification was much lower. Another important aspect of the graph is that there was a remarkable number of men, 90%, who took up a 'skilled vocational
diploma
course' which left women to only just a tenth. Since men continued their education and achieved post-graduate qualifications, females with an undergraduate
diploma
much outweighed the ratio of males.
Finally
, the proportion of male whose
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higher
highest
education was a bachelor's degree was about 45%, whereas the
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female
females'
ratio was somewhat more than that.

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