Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation hove more pros than cons?

Modern technology has equipped us with
machines
, which are working like robots. There are positive and negative
effects
of these
machines
on the individual and
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society, which I shall highlight in
this
essay.
Overall
the pros outweigh the cons. On the positive side,
machines
are faster, more convenient and
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. Households and industries are much facilitated with
machines
. Personal use of
machines
gives people more free time to spend with family and pursue hobbies.
Likewise
, industrial use of
machines
reduces manpower for
work
and increases output. ln the words of Oscar Wilde - "On mechanical slavery, on the slavery of the machine, the future of the world depends."
Moreover
, computer
machines
or robots manage our banks and even the tickets at the airport are issued by machine-robot.
The computerization
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certainly relieves human beings from
dull
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repetitive
task
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without
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any
human error. What is more, robotic surgery is being done to overcome the
limitation
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of human beings
such
as trembling of human hands. Microscopic surgeries and eye operations can be better done with the help of robotic surgeons. On the negative side,
machines
reduce the need
of
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manual
work
, which can lead to unemployment
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especially in
the
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developing countries. What is more, insufficient knowledge of machine handling and operating is detrimental to uneducated workers and they end up getting injuries or disabilities
while
working with
machines
. Technical failures can
also
disturb the whole working system and lead to losses. Other negative
effects
of
machines
are on the health of individuals, especially
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housewives who rely heavily on
machines
for
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household chores.
Machines
are a failure where creative
work
is required. For example,
machines
cannot reproduce the unique and original
work
done by many artisans.
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It
has been rightly said that a
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machine
can do the
work
of a thousand ordinary men, but no machine can do the
work
of one extraordinary man.
Overall
, the positive
effects
of
machines
outweigh the negative
effects
on the individual and society.
However
, in developing countries, in order to meet the employment needs of the population, a balance has to be maintained between manual
work
and mechanization.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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