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It is sometimes said that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Do you agree?

#salary #factor #job
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Job is essential
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for
 all to survive in
this
 world.People always search for
job
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the job
a job
jobs
 which depends on the wages.Most people agree that high salary is
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 for selecting a job. Since
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we are living in a developing country
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there are different types of work
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 available in our area.Even though most vacancies available in all sector
area
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areas
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individuals always look forward to the high professional work which provide high pay.It is all because
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to maintain and to bring up a family the payment given by the government is very low.In some areas people migrate to other countries for better work and to earn more.
Hence
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we understand that
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people are ready to do any profession if earnings are high. Turning to the another point
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another reason for choosing
better occupation
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a better occupation
 with better pay is that the increasing value of the market products.For each and everything that we purchase from outside is very costly.Human are not satisfied with the deplorable products
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since it is sometimes harmful to them.Categorically
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speaking public always have the tendency of purchasing good and valuable products.As we are living in a globalised world
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individuals always get
infactuated
marked by foolish or unreasoning fondness
infatuated
infected
 with others property.They try to imitate others in their own way.In
such
 circumstances
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the money is mostly needed one.In some European countries
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the hourly payment is available for any profession.For these reasons
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individual move to foreign countries.When compared to our country the working hours are more than the other. To sum up, better employment and
high
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higher
 earnings are the major source for
good
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better
 life styles.So an individual
always look
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always looking
 for good pay other than occupation.So from my opinion
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I always give preference to the wages than the occupation.
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