Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Travelling is not new to humankind, modern humans started in Africa ten
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thousand
thousands
years ago and settled in different parts of the world. Early humans wandered for survival
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reasons, but
reasons but
modern ones travel to relax during their holidays. Now a
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day
days
, a trend, where people are visiting places which have uninhabitable conditions. In
this
essay I will list the pros and cons of the trend. One advantage is
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a sense
sense
of achievement. But going to places where
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the majority
a majority
majority
would not travel make them unique among their social circles.
This
makes them
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feel
feels
special and proud.
Also
, they can
be fond of; be attached to
cherish
cheirsh
those adventurous moments as they may not do it again in future. Another benefit is we can appreciate the modern comforts which we take it for granted.
Also
, these expeditions are helpful to replicate and study the conditions of other planets on which space research institutes trying to colonise. Even though there are several advantages, there are a few disadvantages as well. One clear disadvantage is the costs, since these places have little connection to civilised
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world, it
world it
is hard to access them
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,
,
so it involves a fair amount of spending. Since these places are very remote, medical supplies are very scarce. So it will be a
(of events) having extremely unfortunate or dire consequences; bringing ruin
disastrous
disastorous
place to get sick. To summarise, even though travelling to remote places like
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the Sahara
Sahara
or
an extremely cold continent at the south pole almost entirely below the Antarctic Circle; covered by an ice cap up to 13,000 feet deep
Antarctica
Anatarctica
involves a lot of money and need medical supervision it is worth for people who need a sense of achievement.
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Also, it
Also it
will be helpful to study conditions which are helpful for space
to travel for the purpose of discovery
exploration
explortion
.

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