Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Travelling is not new to humankind, modern humans started in Africa ten

thousands

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thousand

years ago and settled in different parts of the world. Early humans wandered for survival

reasons but

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reasons, but

modern ones travel to relax during their holidays. Now a

days

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day

, a trend, where people are visiting places which have uninhabitable conditions. In

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essay I will list the pros and cons of the trend. One advantage is

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a sense

of achievement. But going to places where

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the majority

a majority

would not travel make them unique among their social circles.

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makes them

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feel

special and proud.

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, they can

cheirsh

be fond of; be attached to

cherish

those adventurous moments as they may not do it again in future. Another benefit is we can appreciate the modern comforts which we take it for granted.

Also

, these expeditions are helpful to replicate and study the conditions of other planets on which space research institutes trying to colonise. Even though there are several advantages, there are a few disadvantages as well. One clear disadvantage is the costs, since these places have little connection to civilised

world it

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world, it

is hard to access them

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so it involves a fair amount of spending. Since these places are very remote, medical supplies are very scarce. So it will be a

disastorous

(of events) having extremely unfortunate or dire consequences; bringing ruin

disastrous

place to get sick. To summarise, even though travelling to remote places like

Sahara

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the Sahara

Anatarctica

an extremely cold continent at the south pole almost entirely below the Antarctic Circle; covered by an ice cap up to 13,000 feet deep

Antarctica

involves a lot of money and need medical supervision it is worth for people who need a sense of achievement.

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will be helpful to study conditions which are helpful for space

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to travel for the purpose of discovery

exploration

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

breathtaking landscapes
unique ecosystems
sense of adventure
personal growth
indigenous cultures
environmental conservation
climate change
environmental degradation
economically disadvantaged areas
physical health
harsh weather
difficult terrain
limited access to medical facilities
fragile ecosystems
habitat destruction
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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Fully explain your ideas

A lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents' pressure. Do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports?

Big family has more benefits than living in small family.

some perants buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and disadvantaged for the child of having a large number of toys

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positve or negative situation?

‏In many countries today, both men and women need to work full time. Therefore, some people think men and women should share household task equally (e.g. cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?