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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflects the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

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Currently, there are lots of products manufacturing by different companies around the world. They are using plenty of advertisements to sell their stuff to people sometimes it affects to buy. In my opinion, I agree that people willing to buy
unnecessary household lure
Suggestion
an unnecessary household lure
unnecessary household lures
 by advertisements.
On the other hand
, advertisements are mainly placed to increase the sales of their manufacture. The growing number of international countries every year trying to upgrade their product's sales from the public,
therefore
, they are fixing billboard and telecasting commercial ads on the television with
young attractive
Accept comma addition
young, attractive
 models, sometimes they
hiring
Suggestion
hire
are hiring
 some famous celebrities
such
 as film actors,
sportspersons
 to act on it to lure the buyers to buy their products.
Thus all
Accept comma addition
Thus, all
 the people get attracted through the publicity, they try to get those products without
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 the needs of that.
For example
, online shopping mostly affected by every individual they usually send some mails and cookies to
showup
Suggestion
show up
 their
makings
a distinguishing symbol
markings
, which, push everyone to use some fake products that are really disappointing measures
On the other hand
, we cannot blame on ads every time, which has so many important advantages to the inhabitant and the users, because it helps to find out the real genuine products which will reduce the time of spending on finding the necessary goods.
Moreover
, It tends to finger out the ingredients and manufacturing details. In conclusion, it is clear that ads are unavoidable in the business world, they always focus on sales to rise up, but human we want to differentiate the needs before they try to use.
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