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Explain the graph for the consumption of the European countries. For meat ,chicken and lamb.

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The shown graph demonstrates the change in the
consumption
 of
fish
,
chicken
,
beef
 and lamb in Europe country. The graph shows
this
 change in the period of time, between 1979 and 2004. Starting with the
fish
consumption
, it could be concluded that between 1979 and 2004,
fish
consumption
rate
 relatively remains constant 50 grams.
On the other hand
, for
chicken
 and the other two types of meat (
beef
, lamb), their
consumption
 per person per week differs by
t
Suggestion
from
ime. In 1979 the
consumption
 of lamb reaches to 150 grams, and
then
 dramatically falls to 50 grams in 2004.
On the contrary
, the
consumption
 of
chicken
 enlarges since 1979. The
consumption
rate
 jumps from 150 to 250 grams in the period from 1979 to 2004. For the
second
 type of meat (
beef
), the graph
also
 shows reducing in the
beef
consumption
 between 1979 and 2004. The
consumption
 in 2004 was only 100 grams against 200 grams in 1979 which reflects a huge decrease. In conclusion, the
consumption
 of
beef
 and meet rapidly decreased between 1979 and 2004.
In contrast
, the
consumption
rate
 of
chicken
 showed a huge increase fo
r t
Suggestion
in
he same time. While the
consumption
rate
 of the
fish
 remained steady .
Accept space
.
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