Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

Tourism is believed to increase the economy of a
country
. It not only brings
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money, but
money but
also
brings employment for the people of a
country
. Some people believe that it has
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a negative impact
negative impact
on the environment and
this
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism. Tourists spend a good amount of money whenever they visit a new
country
. There are many shopkeepers who are able to feed their families because of the tourists.
For example
, Dubai, the
country
famous for its buildings, deserts and super cars. Dubai is the only
country
which is visited by half of the population of
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the world
world
. Dubai makes more than 50% of its global income from tourism. There is no denying the fact that tourism boosts up the
country
's economy. Despite the benefits, some people believe that it affects the environment badly. The local
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peoples'
peoples
people
complaints about the waste the tourists make due to which the environment become polluted.
For example
, there are many reports which
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show
shows
the increase in plastic waste on several beaches. People throw empty water bottles on the beach which is taken to the ocean through sea waves. The marine life is on the edge of extinction due to the single use plastic. In conclusion,

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