Some people feel that boarding schools (where student or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of the debate and reach a conclusion.

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Many people consider that it has a lot of benefits to send their children to residential schools.

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, some refuse and argue that there are many constraints to children to

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and live in a dormitory. In

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essay, it will be discussed both sides of the argument and achieve a conclusion.

In recent years number

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In recent years a number

of families that send their children to private schools, especially boarding schools on the basis of numerous benefits, is increasing. Since there is more persistent and well-equipped

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environment, students can fully concentrate on their learning and they can get to excellent

study

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, they would be co-educated and get

motivation

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the motivation

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hard from each other in a result of staying together for all the time.

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. It will develop the team-working and collaborative ability during their term.

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, students that live in a dormitory or far from their homes, will be getting more independent, self-reliant, and confident than others that go to day-schools.

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, children can be prepared

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for

university life

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earlier.

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, it is possible to be disadvantageous to send children to boarding school. Children cannot get their parents’ care and cut off the rest social environment. It can particularly cause to homesickness and

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a feeling

that abandoned from the families

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primary school aged children.

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, some student even may learn some bad habits from each other during they are living together and spending their spare time together without their parental control. To illustrate, nowadays video games on computer and smart phones are getting more common and boys play it together a lot in their spare

time which

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time, which

would cause to an addiction and affect to worsen that

students

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student

learning performance. It is

logically

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logical

to conclude that here are certain reasons to choose schools that offer boarding if people decide to send their children to private schools

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including higher quality of

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including higher quality

education, independence at

young age

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a young age

, self-confidence and preparation

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for

university life if people can explain and convince properly to their children about

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the reasons

and benefits and their care.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

350 words

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