Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

These days more
crime
rate because of media and ways of living some people
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want
wants
more
police
help to
control
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this, but
this but
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according
acccording
to me
this
is not right solutions
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for to
forto
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reduce
reudce
the
crime
and,
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to
for
some extend that way is good but we need to
control
crime
make increase income and try to decrease poverty. In these days only
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poverty, create
poverty create
bad happens in
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the world
world
.
Firstly
,
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I
i
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disagree
am disagreeing
have disagreed
am disagree
police
only one way to
control
the rate because any country
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wants to find
wants to to find
these
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types
type
of problem find the main reasons of
crime
and bad happen
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then
than
start to
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plan
planning
to reduce.Because some people will not find the solution all of them need to improve it.
Secondly
, media
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play
plays
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an overall role
overall role
the overall role
virual role
to improve the best and,
crime
free community they make good and motivational shows which
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inspired
insparied
the youth and other people that help to decrease
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crime rates
the crime rate
crime rate
.
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Police
police
helps some
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attend, but
attend but
extend but
etend but
not all the yes
ofcouse
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I
i
am agree if
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governments
govternment
make very
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stricter
strict
stick
strick
law than
police
help to reduce the
crime
. In
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a nutshell
nutshell
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,
,
police
plays only 30% role to
control
the
crime
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,
,
therefore
other part to
control
and reduce
crime
only public and media.

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